why won’t he listen?
such startling idiocy
agonising drive
a long way from home
tunnel ahead leads nowhere
bullseye missed by far
river road gives hope
an escape from grueling hell
lingering madness
all reason be damned
wherever this ferry goes
I will go with it
Some call it red 
Good one been there
That’s very strong, very evocative.
I love your style =)