poems goodbye October 2, 2013by heather anne Part of me is still lying on that floor, weeping. Life gone from your eyes. Share this: Share on X (Opens in new window) X Share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook Share on Reddit (Opens in new window) Reddit Email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email Share on Tumblr (Opens in new window) Tumblr Share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) Pinterest Like Loading...
There is so much emotion packed into those three lines! Well done
That always sucks. Know that feeling. Awesome poem.
you have captured the feeling of heartbreak perfectly..
There is no turning around when the life is gone. Very nice
Exquisite depiction of heart ache.
Oh. So sad.
You nailed it! As you do with ALL your poems. Love your work!
WOW!
emotive – beautiful, love it.