poems Contrasting Eyes April 24, 2013by heather anne He looked down at himself and saw adequacy. She looked at him and saw brilliance -her heart skipped a beat. Share this: Share on X (Opens in new window) X Share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook Share on Reddit (Opens in new window) Reddit Email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email Share on Tumblr (Opens in new window) Tumblr Share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) Pinterest Like Loading...
Do you mind people asking about your poems? I am horrible with poetry and love dissecting others. Is him looking down figurative? What’s he looking down at? And I hope it’s your heart skipping a beat. 😉 Nice seeing a happy poem out of you. Reply
I don’t mind at all, but you may be dissatisfied with my responses because I don’t have all the answers. 😉 In this case, though, I think of the looking down as both figurative and literal. Reply
This reminded me of something from a long time ago: http://duncancleary.wordpress.com/2011/10/04/electric/ Reply
Some call it red 
Do you mind people asking about your poems? I am horrible with poetry and love dissecting others.
Is him looking down figurative? What’s he looking down at? And I hope it’s your heart skipping a beat. 😉 Nice seeing a happy poem out of you.
I don’t mind at all, but you may be dissatisfied with my responses because I don’t have all the answers. 😉 In this case, though, I think of the looking down as both figurative and literal.
Short but contains much depth. I like that a lot 🙂
thanks lovely!
This reminded me of something from a long time ago: http://duncancleary.wordpress.com/2011/10/04/electric/
Oh, I’ve had this happen so often. I should be more wary of the adequate!