Contrasting Eyes

He looked down at himself
and saw adequacy.

She looked at him
and saw brilliance

-her heart skipped a beat.

6 thoughts on “Contrasting Eyes

  1. Do you mind people asking about your poems? I am horrible with poetry and love dissecting others.

    Is him looking down figurative? What’s he looking down at? And I hope it’s your heart skipping a beat. πŸ˜‰ Nice seeing a happy poem out of you.

    1. I don’t mind at all, but you may be dissatisfied with my responses because I don’t have all the answers. πŸ˜‰ In this case, though, I think of the looking down as both figurative and literal.

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