poems Contrasting Eyes April 24, 2013by heather anne He looked down at himself and saw adequacy. She looked at him and saw brilliance -her heart skipped a beat. Share this:Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Click to share on Reddit (Opens in new window)Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window)Click to share on Tumblr (Opens in new window)Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window)Like this:Like Loading...
Do you mind people asking about your poems? I am horrible with poetry and love dissecting others. Is him looking down figurative? What’s he looking down at? And I hope it’s your heart skipping a beat. 😉 Nice seeing a happy poem out of you. Reply
I don’t mind at all, but you may be dissatisfied with my responses because I don’t have all the answers. 😉 In this case, though, I think of the looking down as both figurative and literal. Reply
This reminded me of something from a long time ago: http://duncancleary.wordpress.com/2011/10/04/electric/ Reply
Some call it red 
Do you mind people asking about your poems? I am horrible with poetry and love dissecting others.
Is him looking down figurative? What’s he looking down at? And I hope it’s your heart skipping a beat. 😉 Nice seeing a happy poem out of you.
I don’t mind at all, but you may be dissatisfied with my responses because I don’t have all the answers. 😉 In this case, though, I think of the looking down as both figurative and literal.
Short but contains much depth. I like that a lot 🙂
thanks lovely!
This reminded me of something from a long time ago: http://duncancleary.wordpress.com/2011/10/04/electric/
Oh, I’ve had this happen so often. I should be more wary of the adequate!