8 thoughts on “hungry

    1. Yup! Me too πŸ˜‰ Sometimes a haiku comes to me while I’m driving. I keep repeating it over and over until I can write it down to ensure I don’t forget it.

  1. On your main page this appeared as a single line and I really liked it that way. Funny the atrocious formatting on wordpress sometimes causes an interesting transformation.

    1. aghh I know. I gave up trying to keep the form of my writing long ago. None of my poems on here appear as they were originally written in my notebook. But yes, I actually agree with you on this point. The single line keeps the flow better.
      I guess sometimes the formatting offers something unexpectedly pleasing.

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