poems before dawn June 6, 2014by heather anne ahead of the sun able bodies gathering to breathe together Share this: Share on X (Opens in new window) X Share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook Share on Reddit (Opens in new window) Reddit Email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email Share on Tumblr (Opens in new window) Tumblr Share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) Pinterest Like Loading...
Lovely Haiku. I knew you could do it. Wonderful post, Melanie bd my other blog: http://www.beloved76.blogspot.com Reply
I really like this! Thanks for checking my haiku out 🙂 I am going to take a look…but I already know I will follow you…good energy! Reply
Lovely haiku! Reminds me of the lyrics to one of my favorite songs: “Mouthful of Air” by Catherine Wheel Deeper and deeper, I go Your hearts drownin’, I know All my intentions are clear I need to rescue my dear So I dive, don’t despair Coming down with a mouthful of air To share To swim with the shellfish, I wish And suck with the sea queen, I wish Muscles and coral are here I need to rescue my dear So I dive, don’t despair In the gloom just assume that I care Coming down with a mouthful of air To share I’ll feed you much better Reply
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Lovely Haiku. I knew you could do it. Wonderful post,
Melanie
bd
my other blog:
http://www.beloved76.blogspot.com
nice one. captures the moment. zen
I really like this! Thanks for checking my haiku out 🙂 I am going to take a look…but I already know I will follow you…good energy!
Lovely haiku! Reminds me of the lyrics to one of my favorite songs:
“Mouthful of Air”
by Catherine Wheel
Deeper and deeper, I go
Your hearts drownin’, I know
All my intentions are clear
I need to rescue my dear
So I dive, don’t despair
Coming down with a mouthful of air
To share
To swim with the shellfish, I wish
And suck with the sea queen, I wish
Muscles and coral are here
I need to rescue my dear
So I dive, don’t despair
In the gloom just assume that I care
Coming down with a mouthful of air
To share
I’ll feed you much better
I had never heard that before! Great tune.
Graceful
Lovely haiku 🙂