here we go, another round in the
boxing ring. you against me this time
goody for you, I think you may have won.
how dull, hum drum, just another woman
who loves you. set the doll aside, its
weeping eyes can put out a fire before
it combusts. I heard energy cannot be
destroyed, only transformed, and this
woman, too, like the fruit flies who pop
persistently in and out of existence from
nowhere. off to find another painful body
to experience, hopefully one a bit better
suited this time, or at least with some very fine
armour. one with white white teeth and some
plump, pink lips that you’d happily bleed
to be swallowed by.
after all you’re that kind of a guy.
I think that last punch wasn’t
even thrown by your good side.
save the worst for last, like someone
else I used to know. strike low blow
after low blow. hey, here’s some space
for you. I have miles of it, you couldn’t
find me with the Hubble telescope.
how’s this? can you feel me again?
can you taste this waning love on your
tongue like yesterday’s leftovers?
pack it up and don’t forget to toss
it in the trash after the fact cause
you never meant to bring it home in
the first place.
Powerful….so raw and powerful….Speechless.
thank you, Ese xo
Well written. Do you like boxing?
Not really. Do you?
Yeah, somewhat. I prefer rock n roll.
Me too 😊
Yeah? That’s great. What bands?
While your writing is usually painful, it’s still beautiful to see that you wrote. Write more often. 😉
I knowww. Try try again. Tell me the secret to maintain a blog Paul!
Figuring it out myself. I am just starting to refresh it with my writing stuff. Just really need to get more published work out there. And apparently for you? A broken heart is how you maintain the blog 😉
Lol yeah how sad is that
I hope one day you find a man who through happiness forces you to write so you can express what he means.
That would be something
I love this…
“just another woman
who loves you. set the doll aside, its
weeping eyes can put out a fire before
it combusts.”
❤
Thank you so much for reading. It really means a lot and even more so that you enjoyed it 😊
you write well. i would love to see whats on the other side of your coin.
thanks 🙂
Visceral. Talented.
😊
“one with white white teeth and some
plump, pink lips that you’d happily bleed
to be swallowed by.”
Damn! That’s a good line. Nice work!
thanks 🙂
The most powerful poem I’ve ever read here on WordPress.
You nailed it and the truth to your words have a punch to its honest of things. 🙂